2. Wordiness
3. Lady or the Tiger Vocab- go over a few too
- Sentimental
- Elaborate
- Reinforce
- Ambivalent
- Amused
- Vibrant
- Poignant
4. Intro Writing- Revision-
- Eliminate red lines
- Eliminate generic words (USE VIVID WORDS AND DETAILS)
- Tell a story (don't start with, "this picture...")
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